Jermaine is always seen on the basketball court shooting hoops from dawn to dusk.(1) At school he is always drawing pictures of playing basketball or of him holding the championships.(2) During practices Jermaine runs down the court and players just fall out of his way as he crosses over. (3) However, Jermaine has a weird habit of taking the basketball everywhere he goes. EX. school (4), gym (5), shower (6). Jermaine looks at his basketball, Ex. Jermaine talks to the basketball. Shots of Guys and girls 2 shots and then close up of Jermaine and then the gradual zoom out of him with with his basketball smiling at it. (7) The ball begins to talk to Jermaine over time and tells him not to talk to girls or look at them. Much of his time is spent with the ball now. ex. carrying, talking, eating. (8) In the end the ball takes over so much of his life. The ball basically becomes his girlfriend. pic of stuff on the ball. (9) The boy is about to get a tattoo of the basketball on his back. When he is on the way in the car and he realizes the basketball is taking over his life. (10) Realizes he has to basically break up with his basketball. He goes home and starts pacing back and forth about how he is going to break up. His Friend and him are talking about it. He enters the house (dramatic) and sees the basketball. He sits down with the basketball and says its over. (11) Ending of the ball leaving rolling out the door. (turn up the dance music when the ball leaves). (12)
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The idea is genuine but to portray this story, it seems like it will take more than just 3-5 minutes. First you have to establish character than the other character. Then the idea of love ha story be presented. I like the conflict of Jenna going out with his best fend John. The conclusion is fairly simple with Jenna realizing she wanted Leon, but Leon has moved om. Overall i like the story big fella.
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